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June 05 crazy part 2How to write a press release
A press release, also known as a news release, is simply a written statement distributed to the media. They can announce a range of news items: scheduled events, personnel promotions, awards, news products and services, sales accomplishments, etc. They can also be used in generating a feature story. Reporters are more likely to consider a story idea if they first receive a release. It is a fundamental tool of PR work, one that anyone who's willing to use the proper format can use.
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Crazy Part 3:
Hook your Direct Mail Sales letter readers
Anglers in Maine catch trout using dry flies with barbless hooks. Unless they keep tension on the line all the way to the net, they lose the trout. Your sales letters must do the same. But how? One secret to keeping busy business readers hooked is to use irresistible transition sentences. Transition sentences come at the end of one paragraph and the beginning of the next. Good transition sentences leave your readers hanging in a number of ways. One of them is to tell your reader that a number of things are coming up, forcing your reader to transition to the next paragraph to learn what some of those things are. If you’ve ever listened to a person with a pronounced stutter, you know how hard it is to wait while that person completes a thought. Your prospects are the same. If you almost complete a thought at the end of one paragraph, they will begin reading the paragraph that follows to complete your thought. But that’s not all. Another way to keep your reader hooked throughout your copy is to end one paragraph with “that’s not all” or a similar phrase. Or to start your next paragraph with the word “another.” Each device shows the prospect that you have not finished, that the prospect has more to learn. And so the prospect keeps reading. And yes, there are some other hooks you might want to try. You can start a paragraph with the word “you,” the one word that prospects and customers never tire of seeing in print. Or you could try another proven tactic. And that is starting a paragraph with the word “and.” Read the Gospel of Mark in the Bible sometime. It’s one of my favourite books. You’ll find the narrative almost impossible to stop reading, it’s so exciting. That’s because the writer begins so many of his sentences with “and” that you are compelled to continue reading to discover what comes next. (I won’t give away how the book ends. Read it and find out.) But there’s another device that’s just as powerful as the word “and.” Do you know what it is? It’s the question mark. Put one at the end of one paragraph, with the answer at the beginning of the next paragraph, and you’ll keep your readers headed towards your net. So here’s the one thing you need to remember. You’ve figured out by now that the secret to effective transition sentences is to keep your prospective buyer in a state of suspended satisfaction, one where they must keep reading your letter to the end before they feel gratified. And there’s only one sure way of doing that.
June 04 It's getting dark outside, and I am getting crazy :Pcrazy 1:
How to write Argumentative essay
When you are writing a Task 2 answer, a structure based on the following elements could be used (summarised in the flow chart opposite). Introductory paragraph The introduction of a Task 2 answer should begin with a general statement or idea of your own that takes into account the key topic words or their synonyms. The last sentence of the introduction should include a thesis statement which shows the point of view or direction that will be taken in the answer. Body paragraphs Body paragraphs each consist of several sentences that are arranged in a logical way to develop a main idea. You can expect to write about 2-4 body paragraphs for a Task 2 answer. Each of these contains an appropriate connective word to ensure a smooth transition between paragraphs. This connective is then put in a topic sentence which is the main point of the paragraph clearly stated in a sentence. Every sentence in the paragraph must be directly related to it. Try to develop every paragraph adequately. This may be done through the use of examples, explanations, detail, logical inference, cause and effect or making comparisons or contrasts. There are many different ways to organize your ideas for body paragraphs. Be confident of the ideas you choose. The conclusion A good conclusion serves several purposes:
May 27 Loveland Festival (something cool, part of my Dutch portfolio,trying to understand -__- )Op zaterdag 4 augustus 2007 wordt er een vervolg gegeven aan de succesvolle introductie van vorig jaar, opnieuw in het Sloterpark te Amsterdam. In 2006 werd het festival temidden van een overvol seizoen gelanceerd. Na afloop bleek de organisatie goed te hebben ingespeeld op de wensen van het Nederlandse publiek: vernieuwende programmering, unieke locatie en een intieme sfeer zorgden ervoor dat de bezoekers naar huis gingen met het gevoel deel te zijn geweest van een geheel nieuwe ervaring. De vergelijking van Loveland’s eerste festival en de allereerste buitenfeesten bleven dan ook niet uit. Marnix: “Tien jaar geleden was het al te gek om in de buitenlucht wat te dansen op housemuziek. Nu de zomerfestivals als paddenstoelen uit de grond schieten, wordt het publiek veeleisender en is het aan ons de taak om te gaan onderscheiden en het ultieme gevoel van vrijheid te creëren. Hierbij zul je àlle zintuigen nodig hebben.” FIRE! Stage De kaartverkoop online is reeds van start gegaan. Tickets online a € 48,- (excl. presale fee) zijn verkrijgbaar via www.lovelandfestival.nl en via Ticketbox.nl. Kaartverkoop in verschillende winkels in de grote steden gaat donderdag 17 mei van start. Ga voor voorverkoopadressen en overige informatie naar de website. De eerste 500 snelle beslissers krijgen als Early birds een actiekorting en betalen slechts € 40,- (excl. presale fee) per ticket. Dit geldt alleen wanneer de tickets via de festival website worden aangeschaft. Dus wees er bijtijds bij!
Momo and Vivibecause I cant upload pictures to Photo Album
so I am trying to put some pictures of my babe Momo here!
but still it doesnt work.
Seems I cant upload any pictures here
coz it is very difficult to download a software to my PC
I dont understand this
Maybe in sometime I will try again in school
internet connection is usually faster over there
See ya later! May 24 All about EnglishSometime before, I was so proud that I am always one of the top students in high school with the highest grade on English. In the foundation year from Arnhem Business School, I did TPM assignments, I did OPL assignments, and I enjoyed writting in English, and no one has ever told me that my English is not that good.
However, after there it comes this latest BUC teacher, everything has changed. He is very strict on Grammer mistakes, and he made me feel that I am really bad in English, and he always recommends me to write my report a second time. Since then, I has become more and more confused, what should I say in English? or how should I say one meaning of the sentence another way around? I have no clue at all. I just realized that my English level is just standard, and not yet advanced. Because of that, it discouraged my motivation on writting anything in English...
When I was preparing for IElTS test, i never knew that my English could be that bad. Always I felt unfair why I always get 5 in written, but never understand it was because I didn't obtain a good English written ability to win the praise from the guys who grade the test paper.
It is even more difficult to say something out of my mouth decent. What I can it is always express my opinion with poor English full of grammatical mistakes. I just feel so disappointed that I dont want to talk anymore. ( Too extreme?) And I found out that the more nervious I feel when I speak, the more mistakes there will be.
I guess I will just hide somewhere, and try to improve everything. In the latest BUC class, the tutor said that because of my Improvement in English this semester, my final grade on it will be very good. I felt really really happy about that.
Of course, I loved writting! Before, I loved writting in Chinese, and Enlish, now I dont have much chance to write in Chinese anymore, so I hope I can express myself in English well.
In the final BUC exam, there will be a written test. Hope I can be fully prepared for it. I know I always write or talk what comes to my mind right away, but sometimes the my thoughts are just so unorganized. English is far more plain than Chinese, and you need to follow a specific rule when you write. so what I need to do is try to make a nice order of the words in a sentence, and at the meanwhile develop the vocabulary, then I can try to express my opinion in a more organized way. I just want to see my own words logical.
I will try to write something in here everyday, and gradually improve the complexity of my sentences. Hope it is a good way for helpping my self-development on written English.
review of the D-cluster lifeIt's the end of the study year again, everything needs to be cleared up.
Review what I have done so far, generally it was a satisfied half year, nothing really went bad.
About school, There is nothing to complain about, I made a lot of friends, and then there was not so bad team work experience too.
There were sometimes I felt myself emotional, because the English teacher said I that my Written is really weak. I cant really speak up in the group meeting coz i was always afraid that I would say something funny, then I felt very sad about my weak oral English.
Even I cant promise my English expression ability, now there it comes Dutch class. It was ok in the first year, we need to do only written exams, however, now school requires us speaking very good Dutch as well as writing a formal application letter for a Dutch company. Which is very hard for me. I dont want to give it up, but I really do not have motivation on Dutch at all. It is so hard to rememer so many words and there are always complicated sentences with weird order of words. I am totally beaten.
With my Momo, everything went ok, sometimes we had some unhappy quarrel, but I think my bad-temper would always affect him. I always say something unpleasant, and I am really too emotional. Momo is good.
There will be the exam period again, everything just went so fast. I feel I lost control of my life. I would appreciate it very much if I can sit down and be patient to really read something difficult.
I miss my parents too, and hope I can see them soon.
May 05 shi yi xia neng bu neng yongLai zhe li shi yi xia, kan kan zhe ge kong jian hai neng bu neng yong
jin tian you xiao xue de tong xue he wo liao tian
tu ran hen xiang hui jia, xiang hui hangzhou
mei dang yao xie wo de lianxi dizhi de shihou
wo dou bu zhidao yinggai xie shen me dizhi hao
yi zhong mo ming de nan guo
wo xiang hui jia. March 04 更新好久没来更新了~
因为前些时候空间出了些问题, 不能发布日志
现在貌似已经没有什么问题了
可喜可贺~
现在最新的消息是:
我准备在今年暑假的时候回国
理由有两个:
1: 男友去国内做交换生,要带他去杭州玩玩
2: 我很想吃九百碗的铁板烧
其他情况:现在在做去俄亥俄交换前最后的准备
认真学习,把这个学期的项目做完
还有要把考试都考好,是我最大的心愿了
报告完毕 ;) December 26 元旦2007年祝大家一帆风顺,二龙腾飞,三羊开泰,四季平安,
五福临门,六六大顺,七星高照,八方来财,九九同心,十全十美。
眼看大家这元旦将至的时候纷纷在更新space,
我也来这边留两句.
2006年不容易, 2007年希望更上一层楼.
没什么其他的话了,新年新气象! December 10 重新很长时间没有来这里
因为某些原因, 因为某个人
今天来到这里看看, 突然觉得陌生
原来时间真的可以改变很多东西~
连我和我Space之间的亲切感都会变淡
只是想来问声好
对还在坚持看我space的朋友
无论是谁~
想说我还是在这里的, 一如既往~ October 29 A New Day Has Come - Celine DionI was waiting for so long
For a miracle to come Everyone told me to be strong Hold on and don't shed a tear Through the darkness and good times
I knew I'd make it through
And the world thought I had it all But I was waiting for you Hush, love
I see a light in the sky
Oh, it's almost blinding me I can't believe I've been touched by an angel with love Let the rain come down and wash away my tears
Let it fill my soul and drown my fears Let it shatter the walls for a new, new sun A new day has... come
Where it was dark now there's light Where there was pain now there's joy Where there was weakness, I found my strength All in the eyes of a boy October 22 extremely funny Chinglish, I like it~ haha~刚才来了个美国人,进到办公室,前台小姐左看右看,大家都在打游戏,只有自己比较清闲,面带微笑的: 前台小姐:“hello.” 美国人:“hi.” 前台小姐:“you have what thing?” 美国人:“can you speak english?” 前台小姐:“if i not speak english, i am speaking what?” 美国人:“can anybody else speak english?” 前台小姐:“you yourself look. all people are playing, no people have time, you can wait, you wait, you not wait, you go!” 美国人:“good heavens. anybody here can speak english?” 前台小姐:“shout what shout, quiet a little, you on earth have what thing?” 美国人:“i want to speak to your head.” 前台小姐:“head not zai. you tomorrow come!” 美国人吐血。。。 October 21 一个礼拜的假期这个礼拜放假, 我就真的放松了整一周
聚会,逛街,游泳,夜谈,打扫房子
还重新配制了电脑, 换了手机号码
做了不少事情
其实感觉挺好的~
一个好朋友回国前给我留下的话
是希望我不要总是给自己太大压力
我就真的做到了
娱乐一下还是必要的~
昨天晚上稍微放纵了下自己
出去玩时喝了点酒
我不是不能喝酒, 但是总想让自己醉
其实现在生活真的比以前开心很多
但是每每喝醉了以后却又想起那个唱杰伦的歌的人
一幕一幕的
全都仿佛环绕在光芒里。
也许再也回不去那样的纯真年代
也许还需要几个五年才能释怀
但是生活就是要多姿多彩,有丰富的阅历才有意义
只要知道对方过得好就好
没有什么遗憾了~
另外, 我想说我的占有欲并不强
觉得爱是爱, 但是并不一定要在一起
自己每天能享受这种喜悦和关怀
我觉得就满足了
欣赏射手座们追求自由的风格
所以我也时不时的追求一下吧~ 呵呵
只是希望我所有惦记的人都过得好。 :) October 19 new number我换手机号了,新的号码: I've changed my cell phone number, new number is 荷兰外地区outside Holland, please dial :31629585145
荷兰内地区 inside Holland: 0629585145
thank you all ~
October 16 希望*失望我都没现身这么多天了, 这网站的点击数还上了9200,
本来想再也不来了还是觉得对不起这么多关心我的人.
这两天事情太多了, 心情也不好
大概越是放假就会越觉得事情太多需要做
越想逃离
我不善于正面冲突
如果真的难过得不行就只会一声不响离开
平时很少有大动静的我
如果哪天出门
一般都是去散心了
前两天我混充去流浪
结果走到半路又被自己招了回来.
但是也算找到一个平和安详的好城市
美的环境, 印象深刻的人
我会时时想起它带给我的幸福感的
不顺心的事情时时有, 只能自己振作吧.
今天打扫了房子, 但是突然觉得厌倦
发现真正吸引我留下的往往是人而不是环境
不想再妥协了
实在受不了歇斯底里的人
觉得很多东西希望越大失望越大
反而不要在乎的时候才能表现出真正的自己
但是现在的世界又有谁少了谁不行呢?
October 08 RelaxLong time haven't shown up in my space
We went to the lovely Rosendaal again on Saturday
This might just be the paradise for us
sunshine, park, lake, nice coffee, comfortable~
have some girl's talk ^-^
though they had known everything about me
Even they know me better than myself
hmmm~maybe, I admit
Right? you two.
( I know you are looking at this now~ heheh~)
Well, that's a really nice place,
Worth going~
Although the big dog-----
Here are some pictures, just enjoy
I like this white suit, thank to Yanna~ :) October 05 中秋节快乐我不是故意想说一些伤感的话
但是收到朱一宁的邮件,
说"明天是中秋节了,祝你一切都好" , 我很感动
但是又觉得突然难过起来
中秋节, 团圆的日子
但是在我的记忆里, 从来没有全家人一起度过这个节日过
妈妈很忙, 我不是怪她,但是中秋节她总是有事
没想到以前是她不在家, 现在却是我远隔千里不能相聚
我的记忆里很深的一个中秋节
是我夜里骑着自行车在学校旁边的西溪路上, 从天目山路往文三路的方向
也许是去哪里上家教吧.
抬头看看墨色的天
天上的月亮很明亮, 很圆
但是我的心里却很空,就和那时空旷的马路一样
也许我们一家还是有一起过中秋节的时候的
但是我却记不起来了.
明天是中秋节, 本来都忘记了
但是这边又要举办联欢活动
许多不认识的人一起
要闹要跳舞要喝酒
于是我想还是不去了吧
其实我根本不明白中国传统的中秋节应该是怎么过的
是在家里三个人一起吃月饼, 喝茶什么的
还是到户外去赏月?
我能记得的只是一个不是中秋节的日子
我们晚自修结束
因为人多走不快, 大家都慢慢推着自行车走在校园里
有人感叹说: 你看今天的月亮好圆啊~
于是大家都不约而同地抬起头看当时天空里特别明亮的月亮
还记得我和余迪加讨论了一下关于每个月的什么日子月亮会最圆的问题
那个印象居然比中秋节怎么过的还要深
也许中秋节就只是一个月亮特别圆的日子?
不论如何,
能和家人一起过节的还是珍惜时光,
好好过个节吧. :) 母校50周年校庆My senior high school, 50th year annivesary of founding.
Upload some pictures to recall my matted memory.
^-^
Happy Birthday, my high school. |
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